Hard Reject - I need your help?

Hello,
Please help me figure this out.
This morning my 1st two submissions were rejected. Obviously my songs missed the mark but I am not sure exactly why. Here they are on SoundCloud.


I am not ready to give up just yet. But I do need some advice on where I should focus my efforts. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance, Dave

You have to spice up the arrangement, play live and with a sustain pedal. Good luck!

Very “midi” unhuman sound, pour arrangment. I agree with atlemusic music - try to play live with dynamic sustain pedal and create relevant arrangment. Good luck!)
P.s. Second track intro reminded me Crematory - “tears of time”:slight_smile:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SqFeXVf-cwc

Thanks for the feedback. Wow. That Crematory song is uncanny! I have never listened to that band or song before and I cannot believe how close it is :slight_smile:
Thanks
Dave

You are welcome :slight_smile: